Owen: Disabled… Year 9 essay for Y11 critique and revision.

My year 9 are writing about war poetry again. I love this southey to sassoon module. We work on technical elements and are beginning to approach serious analysis of language, structure and form.

In this essay, they were asked to write on which poem studied they found the most effective.

Why not critique this essay – add details and see if you agree with Lucas’ take on the poem. You might also pause and wonder how you were writing in Year 11.

new doc 2018-11-10 10.53.25_2The PDF is here:  new doc 2018-11-10 10.53.25_2